Wednesday, January 26, 2011

Was it love?


You saw me, it was love at first sight,
Things were steady, time took the ride,
We met, we fell in love, and the journey began,
And, we were together, forever to remain.

 People envied us, we were a sight,
You treasured me, I felt like a dreamy night,
We couldn’t wait, we had to see each other every day,
When the day was over, it was the voice to calm the night.

Your support and love was the world for me,
You were the wish I had for so long prayed.
Things were to transform into a story beautiful and so right,
But just then you said, “I no longer miss your eyes!”

What went wrong, what did I do?
Why all of a sudden you left me alone?
How can you say the things so strange?
Was it love, or some fun, now estranged?

How all of sudden you grew so pale,
Your words no more sound fresh, but stale,
Why didn’t you even give it a chance?
Were the things so dead that there was no balm?

 Did you even give it a thought?
Were you ever true or always sham?
How come you did not feel the pinch,
-a void, a hole, an emptiness, a ditch?

Did you even think twice,
Before breaking and shattering my dreams set right?
Did you even think at all,
Before you broke the news to me, and blur my sight?

How are you avoiding the pangs?
Did you ever loved me, or it was all a plan?
Was I a joke, some trick or a bet?
Why did you act cruel, when you initiated this zest?

There are so many questions you’ve left me with,
I am numb, with a sort of a guilt.
Guilt I know will dig into me,
To find an answer to all the misery!

Guilt that I fell in love with you,
Guilt that I dreamt, to be with you.
Guilt that I ruined my time,
For someone who just said, “I miss you no more. I think it is the time!!”

5 comments:

  1. @Nupur: Very well synchronized..Start to end..nicely explains and one can visualize the whole story....Again gr8 lines..Keep it up..:-)

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  2. honestly speaking.... it seems to me like you have given words to my life .... very well written ....


    hey ... i got to this blog via various links ... but I think I know you ... Remember me ... M Anuj's cousin ....

    Sachin
    http://reinviere.blogspot.com/

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  3. @nupur - Kaudan nice poem but dear its so dark...

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  4. @sachin: yup i remember..."D:D
    @anuj: i knw..par cudnt write smthng glossy:D

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  5. beautifully written.. it got a flow and rhythm..
    keep up the good work

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